Abraham Lincoln said, " All men can stand adversity, but if you want to test a mans character, you give him power." This means if you give someone power you'll see how really there personality is. I agree with this quote because it is true when someone has power they turn into somebody who they aren't. This can be clearly seen in
Radiant Shadows when she decides to take to take power from the hounds, she turns into somebody she isn't she's being mean to everybody and thinks she can manipulate anybody.
You started off good just remember not to use I in there. Also you need to expand your thesis. Good job though for your first time.
ReplyDeleteHey there Itzy! First off: your post is fantastic and has a remarkable personality behind it. When annotating a quote, you do not want to use first person. Also, I believe you forgot a period between "true" and "when." Lastly, it seems as if you double spaced before approaching "Radiant Shadows." Keep up the good work!
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